Amberkit :: Ambermist

[Scarlet]

Name: Amberkit :: Ambermist

Age: five moons

Rank: kit

Allegiance: WindClan

Picture:

Appearance: Amberkit is a lithe, cobby she-cat. She has long, satin-silky ginger fur with tabby-stripes aligning her legs and back. She has "Munchkin-"short legs, and a normal-length tail. Amberkit has white patches on her upper legs and stomach (bicolor). She has oval-shaped, deep bronze eyes.

Personality: Though she may appear as fearless, Amberkit is naive and paranoid. At the sound of even a twig cracking, she springs into action, ready to run for her life. She loves food, and running. She hates all kinds of bugs, especially honeybees.

History: Amberkit was born on June eighteenth, 2011 during Greenleaf. *is there anything that is required in this history?*

[☜killjoy creamy☞]

Hi there, Scarlet!
This is a great bio so far, however for me to accept it I'm afraid you're going to have to change a few things.

1.Firstly, in appearance and personality you must have 150+ words.
2.Also, in history 100+ words are required, seeing as your character is a kit.

If you are stuck on what to put for history I suggest putting details about her parents and siblings.
For example,
one of her parents could be dead?
Or she could be the runt if a litter of four?
These are just a few examples, I'm sure you could come up with much better things.

But remember, you cannot have half-clan cats.

You could also include in history any traumatic or life-changing events in her life.

So far, this bio is great!